Narrative Assessment - Literacy: Writing Term 2

Learner: Tammy                    Learning Coach: Abby Morgan             Date: 22 June 2015

Learning Area: Literacy - Writing

Learning Observed

As part of our writing programme we have been exploring different forms of writing. This week we viewed a video of a baby bird hatching and had to describe what happened. We brainstormed ideas before watching and wrote down all the words that we thought would be useful for our writing. After watching the video we added new words to the list and then shared ideas. Tammy enjoyed watching the video and was excited to begin her writing. She has developed her ability to effectively plan for her writing and used a cycle to show the process of the egg hatching. Tammy was able to write three sentences about the video and was able to incorporate four words that we had brainstormed. She was able to locate the words in the list and spell these in her writing. Tammy added personal voice to her writing as she stated “The bird is cute”. She is able to identify the key sounds she hears when sounding out unknown words.

Evidence of learning

Tammy was able to write three sentences about the video. I wonder if she enjoys writing at home too?

Key Competencies/Vision Principles

Tammy has displayed the Vision Principle of capable as she develops new learning skills. She is also demonstrating her ability to use the key competency of using language, symbols and text as she shares her ideas and thoughts through written language. Tammy applies her existing knowledge with new learning which demonstrates her ability to use the Key Competency of thinking.

Next Learning Steps

Assist in learning to correctly use full stops and capital letters Publish her favourite stories on her Blog to share with home